Beergson:
Your system will not work. By incorporating a liquid condensate seal between your condensate being formed and your vacuum system, you have made it difficult - if not impossible - for all the non-condensables to be evacuated by the vacuum system. The nefarious and troublesome non-condensable gases will collect and concentrate in the vertical total condenser’s shell side and mitigate any required heat transfer. These gases will blanket your tubes and make condensation almost impossible. Gases are notorious insulators against heat transfer.
Although your sketch is awkward and not detailed, I think I visualize what you intend to do. I would not advise you to do it this way. Please refer to:
Download the workbook that deals with producing and maintaining a vacuum and follow the guidelines given in the two threads. I don’t know why you want to use a vertical total condenser, but I would not put the condensing vapor on the shell side. I would put the process vapor inlet at the top on the tubeside, with condensing taking place in a downward vertical manner. I would mount the condenser on the receiver tank you show and extract the non-condensables and impose and maintain a vacuum by extracting at one far end of your receiver tank. This I show in one of the above threads.
If the condensate recovered is valuable, I would add a vent condenser - as explained in the above workbook - and recover the last droplets of the condensate in the vent condenser just upstream of the vacuum system, as shown in the workbook - perhaps employing a very cold cooling fluid, such as a refrigerant or a cold glycol solution.
That is the way I would handle this project. I regret that I am unable to make useful comments on your sketch because it is in .pdf format. That is why creating and submitting drawings and sketches in Excel is so much better than anything else. One can make comments, make calculations, insert additional sketches, and call-out critical points on an Excel spreadsheet. All you can do with a .pdf document is look at it - unless you can afford to buy the Adobe program (which I won't do).